So, I was working on an English assignment the other day and one of the ten poems I had to write was a ballad. Now, I almost never write poetry, but I love reading it. Seeing as ballads are sometimes depressing or sad, I was trying to think of something uplifting to write about. Well, that didn't work, so I thought I'd take a stab at trying to write about diabetes.
Forgive me if this sounds too depressing. I realized half way through that it was turning out to be kind of a downer, so I tried to make it end on a happy note. I really wasn't trying to sound depressing. I just needed a good subject to write about. (=
I thought it turned out fairly well. It's obviously not the best poem in the world, but I thought I'd share it anyway. Here goes.
Remember
In the quiet of the night
She cries silent tears
For she can no longer remember
Living without her fears
It was just eight years ago
When she was just a child
But she can no longer remember
Her life when it was not wild
She silently thanks her God
For allowing her to stay
On this lovely earth
For even another day
She smiles at her bittersweet memories
And slowly wipes her tears
For although before is forgotten
She trusts God will ease her fears
What do you think? Is it an okay poem for someone who doesn't write poetry? Or is it really bad? Don't be afraid to tell the truth. (=
|†~*Sarah*~†|
<><