Writing a story let me know if any of yall want to read it!

So i'm working on a story called The Black Rose. I've atually dedicated myself to this story. I woul dlove it if anyone would want to read and let me know if any thinks i should chande some things about it! if you wanna read it ill try to post it. But please help. I'm starting to write againa fter  amajor set back and this time im hoping to publish!!! SO PLEASE HELP! feel free tot ask for everything i've got and ill probably email it ya!

I can edit for you, if you want. I edit for my newspaper, so don't expect me to be easy on you. =P

What's the story about?

I would like to read it! I think it would be awesome. The title sounds really cool though.

My job is editting so if you want I can look at it for you.

[quote user="Sarah"]

I can edit for you, if you want. I edit for my newspaper, so don't expect me to be easy on you. =P

What's the story about?

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perfect thats exactly what i need. disapline. THANX ill just need you email so you can pm me it

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I would like to read it! I think it would be awesome. The title sounds really cool though.

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Cool its only 2 chapters though. so i don't know..... but thanx let me know what you think.

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My job is editting so if you want I can look at it for you.

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Really sweet i need all the help i can get. like i think i said i just started writing again so its probably going to be lame ass and its only about 2 chapters so its a short one but the more help i get in the beggining the more i know what to focus on as i keep writing. THANX

But i'll need all yall's emails cause it just looks funky over the convo thingy im not good with the whole technology thing and im 15! old spirit i suppose ^,^

here is my email addy:  klesla97@gmail.com

 

LET THE STALKING COMMENCE

lol your amazing.... oh and if this gets to the police for stalking i had nothing to do with it.

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here is my email addy:  klesla97@gmail.com

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thank you so much your amaing

Oh yeah my e-mail address is tdcmelbritt@aol.com.

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Oh yeah my e-mail address is tdcmelbritt@aol.com.

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it is only 2 chapters so bare with me here

 

KK. Idc. I still want to read it!

ok cool thanx. oh heyy look for my email: rebeccagiannola@yahoo.com it might be in your junk sooooo

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[quote user="Sarah"]

I can edit for you, if you want. I edit for my newspaper, so don't expect me to be easy on you. =P

What's the story about?

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perfect thats exactly what i need. disapline. THANX ill just need you email so you can pm me it

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No problem. My email is Jesus_Freak0776@hotmail.com.

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[quote user="Charlie"]

[quote user="Sarah"]

I can edit for you, if you want. I edit for my newspaper, so don't expect me to be easy on you. =P

What's the story about?

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perfect thats exactly what i need. disapline. THANX ill just need you email so you can pm me it

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No problem. My email is Jesus_Freak0776@hotmail.com.

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cool thanx my emails rebeccagiannola@yahoo.com

I'd love to proof it for you; I'm a writer too.  My email is smee63@ou.edu. What's it about?

It's pretty awesome :) She has some serious talent